Wednesday 26 March 2014

THE LOST MONSTERS


THE LOST MONSTERS

CRASH!!  BANG!!  THE BOAT CRASHED,   AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!. Nikita and Baileigh SCREAMED.
Is everyone ok Ernesto said!
yeah but are our monsters ok Nikita said.
I will go check on them now don't, worry 
WHAT WHERE ARE THEY?
WHY?
TELL US NOW XAVIAN SCREAMED.                                     
BOOM BOOM BOOM!!! 
WHAT WAS THAT XAVIAN SAID.
EVERYONE ON  THE BOAT FAINTed
12 MINUTES LATER…
WHERE, WHERE ARE WE NOW,  WE CRASHED ON An
ISLAND.
THIS WHAT THE ISLAND LOOKED LIKE
             






   














Ernesto and Xavian hopped out the boat to check if it was safe for the rest to hop out.

wow come look at this guys.
what is it now  Baileigh said.
   WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!  everyone said


Come on everyone were on an adventure remember we need to find Pimpin’,Mr Strong Potato Man and MR Bunn.

So everyone walked slowly and quietly through the forest.


Nek minute.

You hear a booming noise passing you nikita screams her eyes out.
What was that ofcourse, it is Ernesto and Xavian.
It sound like a pack of elephants struggling to get past two metal bars

omggggg!!!!!!!

This is what Nikita looked like when she was screaming,
now do you see what I mean when I said that she was screaming her eyes out, I wasn’t joking  when i said that



Then we see a house under water like a castle wow guys come look at this.
so they all run in the water and in they go in the castle.
what do you think  you're  doing mate.


So they climb over the wall and then they see all four of these monsters trapped.
They secretly pass all of the guards and unlock the cage and came to the surface but  of course all of the monster scream Ernesto said take a monster to the surface the king shouted out get them now but we all got to the surface 
We all escaped and lived happily ever after
THE END.

And i want to say a big thank you to these people


Xavian Gungan,Baileigh Greaves and Nikita Levi-Adams.

PRESENTED BY Ernesto Castillo.

Thank you for Reading my work.









 POTATONAAAAHHHHHHHH  DAAAAADOOOOOOEEEEEE PIMMMMMMPINNNNNNNNN'
And next time potato mans brother comes to potato mans house on a secret mission dan dan dan



This is what potato man brother looks like








1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Good Job
Xavian

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