Thursday 27 March 2014

Monster Writing

Mr Strong
“Aaaaaaaaaa”  Mr Bunn heard a scream from the back of the hall. So he ran from the playground to the hall to go see what was going on. When he got there he saw Baileigh getting eaten by Mr Strong. He quickly ran to get Baileigh out. “What do you think you are doing!?” Mr Bunn said. But Mr Strong wouldn’t speak.Mr Bunn goes back to the playground. Nikita comes along and asks Mr Bunn “Do you know where Baileigh is? She has gone missing I can’t seem to find her anywhere.” “I’m afraid that I haven’t seen them” said Mr Bunn. “Ok that’s fine. Bye” and off she went. She went onto the turf to find them. She didn’t find Baileigh but she found Mr Strong. So she ran to talk to him. She asked him “Have you seen Baileigh?” he didn’t say anything. But Nikita saw that he was beginning to feel sick. Nikita realises that Mr Strong has done something to do with baileigh gone missing. She asks him “Mr Strong have you seen Baileigh?” Mr Strong still doesn’t speak.Then Nikita noticed that Mr Strong was way bigger than he usually is. He was as big as a house. “Why is he that big?” thought Nikita. She realised that Mr Strong had eaten Baileigh. So Nikita decides to get Baileigh back by making him laugh. So she tells him really funny jokes and Mr Strong laughs so hard that he pukes out Baileigh and she’s all covered in disgusting slime and goo. “Eeeewwww!” screamed Baileigh. “This is disgusting!” Sure enough she was all covered in slime and gooey goo. After all that fuss and anger, Mr Strong gets told off by Miss Signal for eating Baileigh. “Why did you eat Baileigh?” asked Miss Signal. “To be quite honest Miss Signal I don’t really know” said Mr Strong in a very confused way. “Well you eating Baileigh was very unexpected. Because you a very kind and friendly” Miss Signal said.  “You will have to go to Baileigh and apologise to her.” “Okay” said Mr Strong very sadly and he stumbled out of the room. Mr Strong walks up to Baileigh and apologises to her. “I am so sorry Baileigh for eating you for no reason.” “Oh that’s fine Mr Strong” said Baileigh. “Oh great I was hoping that you would forgive me because I really want to become friends again” said Mr Strong. “Oh that would be lovely!” Baileigh bursted out. Two years went on and they become best friends. Miss Signal was happy. She was happy because Mr Strong ate Baileigh and she wasn’t very happy but then Mr Strong apologised and they became best friends.
The End


























1 comment:

Anonymous said...

I love how you used lots of onomatopoeia and adjectives because it really entertained me when I was reading your story.
Moe

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